Creativity? Forget what you knew! (Part three)
By Paul Ugoagwu (ugoagwupaul@yahoo.com)
Thursday, November 1, 2007
You could call it child labour in today’s parlance. But in our younger
days nobody saw it that way. My parents (like many parents of that time) tried
all sorts to keep food on the table. But one of the ways we were made to reciprocate
was through street hawking. As the youngest of three sons, I had my allotted
stock. We would map out the streets in our small community and fan out in different
directions using the best method we knew to draw attention to our wares. Some
of tricks we inherited from veterans who could sell snow to Eskimos. Some of
the tricks we invented through experience. Our major wares were perishables
like tomato and pepper. Sometimes plantain would be added.
As we left the house, my mother would say a prayer and urge us on to make it
a sell out. Sometimes when the particular good was in season and competition
was high, she would follow up with incentives like promising us (if we sold
out) a new pair of rubber sandals (a luxury in those days) or a new pair of
shorts (always a welcome change as those were the only thing we wore).
We would look at mother’s face and we would know instinctively that a
lot was riding on our outing for that day. And fired by such sentiments and
the added incentives, we would take the streets by storm and compete among one
another for the highest sales.
My brothers were more experienced. They would sing and dance before prospective
customers. They would weep before doubting prospects telling them mother would
show no understanding if they returned to the house without selling. With those
wares delicately balanced on their heads, they would entertain on-lookers with
stunts that would make Jackie Chan look amateurish. I soon created my own style.
I would visit some of my teachers (who thought I was one of the bright kids
in the class) and those ones would buy gladly from me. I would mimic any dialect
to catch the attention of various ethnic groups. We used every devise under
heaven to sell. And we did try! My mother was very proud of us and, believe
this or not, we were the reference point for good children who did not specialize
in asking parents for sweets and biscuits but who contributed to the family
earnings!
Mind you, although we sometimes entertained our audience with our dance and
cry, we knew our home video entertainment must bring results. We must sell.
It was not enough to sell some. We must sell out day after day. I must also
tell you this: We did not always fancy the goods we sold. But we were in no
position to choose our stock. Mother determined all that.
She simply passed our allotted portion to us and off we would go. It did not
help much either that some other children hawked nicer things like bathroom
slippers, provisions and second hand clothes. Why mother kept giving us tomatoes
and pepper to sell remained a mystery to us. Could it be because we were poorer
than other folks? The goods we sold had life spans. So a deadline came each
stock. If we didn’t sell, there would not only be no money for food, the
goods would perish and mother would lose. We were under constant pressure to
deliver! We must sell.
This in a nutshell captures the copywriter’s job and makes it different
from other forms of writing. I have delved into my not so rosy past to illustrate
the murky nature of writing copies for advertisers of goods and services. Why
our creative standard is taking a nose dive today is that there are many pretenders
to the throne of copywriting who would fare better in other literary kingdoms.
Believe me, I don’t mean to be rude and I am by no means making copywriting
superior to other kinds of writing. It is not. As a matter of fact, it is more
limiting (pardon the pun) than other creative writing. And until recently, it
is less lucrative. All the great copywriters I have known have remained pathetically
poor. Like Nelson Mandela’s slogan, the job is their life. The copywriter
you just told there would be no salary review at the end of the year would brighten
up if you announced to him that his television commercial has been approved
by client. The psychology of winning, the thrill of creating and the promise
of fame are always more rewarding than the pay-slip.
Copywriters write to sell, simple. We conceive ideas and write those ideas so
that we can sell a product or service. A poet can wake up in the middle of the
night and write about the moon and the stars and how wonderful the world is.
We don’t have such luxuries. Unless the world is for sale, we have no
business writing about the world. We are salespeople.
We are no different from those who hawk tomatoes and fish who draw your attention
to their wares and tell you all sorts of stories to make you buy. Yes, we are
no different from the market women or those who sell drugs in big yellow buses.
We are traders. Just like these people, we sell whatever is in stock. We can
sell a disreputable politician. We can sell a dying bank. We can sell cheap
phones. We can sell a war torn country and make it look like a tourist haven.
Like the street hawker, we can use all the gimmicks in the world but our focus
is clear. We are under constant pressure. All the drama, all the theatrics,
all the humor must bring money out of the pocket of the target audience! Now
that’s tough and sometimes a bit demeaning. But we do it.
Although it is far more rewarding to entertain the audience (like those writing
comedies and plays enjoy doing) and it is far less strenuous writing opinions
(like features writers), copywriters must keep pleasure aside when writing.
If you can’t deny your entertainment loving flesh and focus on the soul
of selling clients’ product or service, all your writing will amount to
nothing.
Let’s simplify things a bit. All writers write to an audience for various
reasons – entertain, persuade to a point of view, warn, educate, teach,
and enlighten. Copywriting uses all the reasons for only one purpose –
to sell so that the advertising can achieve his marketing goals. It means that
the copywriter is one of the most disciplined writers in the world.
He is disciplined by time and words because he has very little space on the
pages of the newspapers to do his selling. He is disciplined in information
because although how he says it is his problem, what he must communicate is
clear and non-negotiable. He is discipline by target audience because his message
must target a specific target audience further shrank by age, gender and possibly
socio-economic class. He is also the least important in all the communication
parties. He is the least appreciated also as no one cares about him because
his company has been duly paid for the job. He is the least gratified because
it’s all about the client and his boss who could pass any brief to him.
He is perhaps the most frustrated because like all of us who sold stuff for
our parents, we simply did our job whether we liked it or not.
Now why would anybody want to be a copywriter for goodness sake?
READERS’ COMMENTS
"I am happy each time I read your creativity story. I learn a lot from
it. More power to your elbow." (Adetokunbo Olalekan)
"Hi Paul. I just discovered you. I think I now have a reason to cough out
a hundred naira every Thursday to get The Sun. Keep it up." (Onyeka Emele,
Faculty of Law, UNEC)
"My namesake, thanks for your insights on idea-centred copywriting. Far
too many copywriters are labouring under the illusion that they are literary
heirs to Shakespeare. But its all about moving stuff off the shelves and instigating
positive thoughts towards a brand. You don’t need literature for that
although it can come in useful. You need to immerse yourself in the culture
you’re writing for . Maybe you can discuss that in your next article.
Regards. (Paul Nwabuikwu)
Well said Paul. Thanks for inspiring this!(PaulUgoagwu)